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Ms. Ziff is always organized, resourceful, and ready for anything. She believes in a process, [...] the best of all being the Ms. Ziff approach, which makes her spectacular.Kenneth 8th Grade, Harvard Westlake
Vanessa is high-energy smarts and charm, the kind of writer and teacher who captures and captivates readers of all ages.New York Times bestselling author, Cynthia Leitich Smith
Vanessa’s methods are creative, thorough and innovative. She makes writing fun and has turned our daughter’s “like” of writing into a true “LOVE”.The Altmans
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It's obvious that Vanessa is a wordsmith: "Write. Observe. Revise. Discover...W.O.R.D."  These are the four essential ingredients for becoming a writer; two of them about the work (writing and revising) and two of them about the joy (observing and discovering.) Vanessa accomplishes it all.  Julie Larios, award-winning poet and children’s author
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Velveteen Rabbit Revisions: How to Bring Your Writing to Life (with a Whole Lot of Love!)

Have you ever tried to solve a What’s Wrong With This Picture dilemma? Where you stare at the image for an hour straight without seeing a darn thing, but when you walk away for a while and then take another look, the answer jumps right off the page?

Color Illusion

Welcome to the Revision Process.

Today’s REVISE post is about gaining new perspectives on your writing, so you can bring it to life on the page.

Kate Messner In her blog post, 65 Off-Draft Writing Prompts to Kick-Start Revision, Kate Messner provides over two months worth of daily revision quick writes for all ages. Each prompt provided is sure to take your writing – and your students’ writing – to a whole new level of real.

The term “Off-draft writing” means exactly what it says: writing that’s completed away from your draft, but which both informs your story and enhances its depth.  As Messners says, “Sometimes, the very best ideas for revising a piece of writing happen not when we’re staring at that piece of writing but when we’ve set it aside to write on a different sheet of paper or type in a new document.”

Messner points out: “The word REVISION breaks down into re-vision… or seeing again.”

See Again When you look at your piece from various angles and ask yourself the right questions, you’re able to crack open your story to see your ideas in new ways, and love your story all the more. The more you study your characters, the better you understand their motives and conflicts and can ratchet up the suspense. The more you observe your settings, the deeper each outer landscape reflects a character’s inner one. Knowing your writing intimately is what makes your story believable and real.


How real is your story right now? 

Whether you’re in the throes of revisions or helping your students through the process, if the believability factor is anything less than 10, then consider some of Messner’s refreshing, creative, off-draft writing prompts:

Let’s start with the main character.

  • 1. Describe your main character’s bedroom. Don’t forget to look in drawers and closets, and under the bed.
  • 10. Write your main character’s obituary.
  • 14. Write a letter from your main character to you (the author!) Start like this: The thing you’re not understanding about me is…

If you want each of your characters to leap off the page in 3-D, then you must consider all facets of their personality as vital to your story:

  • 12. Write about your antagonist’s greatest regret in life.
  • 23. Create a music playlist for your antagonist.
  • 28. What’s in your antagonist’s refrigerator?
social media Forming a new perspective does not always mean writing something new. Creative knows no bounds. Try developing a social media page and profile for one of your characters and let the revelations roll in. Consider a few more of Messner’s related prompts:


  • 39. Make an imaginary Facebook wall for a character you need to understand better.
  • 52. What would your character’s Pinterest boards be about?
Velveteen Rabbit and Skin Horse Finally, examine the deeper meaning of your writing, its theme and purpose. Only when the boy loved the Velveteen Rabbit with all his heart, bit by bit for a long time (not all at once) did the cherished, shabby toy become Real. And according to the Skin Horse, who was always truthful, “Once you are Real you can’t be ugly, except to people who don’t understand.”

The time and care you take – bit by bit – to imagine and craft truly authentic stories is what makes your fiction and creative nonfiction Real To Readers. Contemplate Kate Messner’s final prompt to get to the heart and soul of your writing:

  • 65. Stephen King said that, “Fiction is the truth inside the lie.” What is the truth your book is telling, whether it’s fiction or nonfiction?


When you’re stuck inside the revision process, W.O.R.D. Ink highly recommends using Messner’s 65 invaluable revision techniques to help you think in different directions and spark your creativity. Taking another 65 looks at your writing will no doubt trigger new approaches and modes of thought, presenting opportunities to turn a decent piece of writing into dynamite!


Kate Messner is an award-winning children’s author and National Board Certified teacher of fifteen years. For a full reveal of her 65 revision prompts, check out her awesome blog post: 65 Off-Draft Writing Prompts to Kick-Start Revision

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